Baemyeong Festival and my birthday

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Last week friday was my school festival day. But that day it was raining so the school festival starts in indoors.The program was not fun but the food and the performance of the girl middle school and girl band was really great. And last Saturday was my birthday. I went to shopping mall and bought a lot of clothes. And I ate a nic dinner(shabushabu)with my family.And on Sunday it was my church 30th anniversary day.So,there was a worship.

>> Last Friday was our school festival day. But it was raining on that day so the school festival started indoors. The program was not fun but the food and the performances of the middle school girl and girl band were really great. And last Saturday was my birthday. I went to the shopping mall and bough a lot of clothes. I ate a nice dinner (shabu-shabu) with my family. And on Sunday, it was my church\'s 30th anniversary day so there was a worship.