balancing between discipline and support
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually,balancing between discipline and support is really important but challenging. In our academy, our teachers and I have a kind of role division, For most students\\\' disciplines, I have central responsibility,so our teachers always report to me about problematic students and I suggest several ways to deal with them. Meanwhile, our teachers support them and don\\\'t save compliments whenever they show small changes or improvement.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I think your idea of role distribution is great because, at least, you can balance discipline and praise. I think you being the center and giving them advice makes it easier for teachers to deal with students because, at least, their decisions won’t be biased and they can just follow your suggestions. This can also maintain professionalism when dealing with problematic students. Just for grammar: ‘Role division’ isn’t natural in English; ‘division of roles’ or ‘role distribution’ is correct.
- T. Caitlyn
Actually, balancing between discipline and support is really important but challenging.
>> CORRECT
In our academy, our teachers and I have a kind of role division,
>> In our academy, our teachers and I have a kind of division of roles.
For most students\' disciplines, I have central responsibility, so our teachers always report to me about problematic students and I suggest several ways to deal with them.
>> CORRECT
Meanwhile, our teachers support them and don\\\'t save compliments whenever they show small changes or improvement.
>> Meanwhile, our teachers support them and don’t hold back compliments whenever they show small changes or improvements.
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