Baseball 2 and Korean food
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Hi [이름]! ^^
You surely are addicted to baseball. Like you\'ve said, it changed your life. ^^
So, it has a great impact to your life. But, remember, your studies are your priorities first.
Let us talk about the Korean food that you\'ve told me. :)
Hmmmm.. I don\'t know what to say. LOL.. I will soon try those Korean food that you\'ve recommended. kiki.
Good luck to me. hehe
I will see you in our class. :)
Take care :)
~~ Teacher Kris
Tommorrow it will be great day.
>> Tomorrow it will be a great day.
Regular baseball seasons start!
>> Regular baseball season has just started.
I feel like don\'t go to school and academy and go to the baseball stadium for celebrate baseball\'s special day.
>> I feel like I don\'t want to go to school or to our academy because I want to go the stadium to celebrate the special baseball day.
I waited for many months for next day.
>> I have been waiting for many months for this.
Baseball gave me friend and interest and passion,challenge,and laugh.
>> Baseball gave me friends, interests, passion, challenges and laughter.
Baseball is best sport to me.
>> Baseball is the best sport for me.
I can\'t go to the baseball stadium because it\'s too far to go there.
>> Correct
Next day,the game is (KIA-NC), (Nexen-Lotte), (Samsung-Dusan),(SK-KT),(LG-Hwanha).
>> Next day, the teams that will compete are (KIA-NC), (Nexen-Lotte), (Samsung-Dusan),(SK-KT),(LG-Hwanha).
Kimchi is traditional Korean food.
>> Kimchi is a traditional Korean food.
Deonjang soup is traditional Korean food.
>> Deonjang soup is traditional Korean food.
Most of foreigner hate it because of smell but it taste good.
>> Most foreigners hate it because the bad smell but it is actually good.
And maybe the foriegners like bulgogi.It\'s a meat.
>> Maybe the foreigners like bulgogi because it is meat.
And it\'s very tasty and when you eat with vegetable.
>> It is very tasty when you eat it with vegetables.
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