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2011-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

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Today, I had traning from Dr. [Name]. He told me that I need to work on speed. My speed it's not very good but I'm in the good one. However, my control is in the line of normal so I need to train. There is the catcher and he will move. Then the way where he goes, I need to throw that way. Also, I need to make my feet straight to the catcher. It's hard to do that. Then I will make the bball speed higher to make more and more strikeouts.

강사 첨삭

Hi Joey!

You did a excellent job in writing this! It is interesting that you have to work on your speed. That뭩 one of the things I wasn't able to work on when I was younger. I used to play softball (it뭩 a bit similar, I think..hehehe). Good luck on your training with Dr. [Name]. Have a nice evening!

Karla

Today, I had traning from Dr. [Name].

>>Correct

OR>>Today, I trained with Dr. [Name].

He told me that I need to work on speed.

>>Correct

OR>>His advice was to work on my speed.

My speed it's not very good but I'm in the good one.

>>My speed is not very good but I뭢 in a good position.

However, my control is in the line of normal so I need to train. 

>>However, my control is within the normal range so I need to train.
There is the catcher and he will move.

>>Correct

OR>>It is the catcher뭩 role to move.

Then the way where he goes, I need to throw that way.

>>I need to throw the ball in the direction he goes to. 

Also, I need to make my feet straight to the catcher.

>>Correct

OR>>Additionally, I have to keep my feet straight to the catcher.

It's hard to do that.

>>Correct

OR>>It is quite challenging to do that.

Then I will make the bball speed higher to make more and more strikeouts.

>>Correct

OR>>Then I will make throw the ball faster in order to make a lot of strikeouts.

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