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Hi Joey!
You did a excellent job in writing this! It is interesting that you have to work on your speed. That뭩 one of the things I wasn't able to work on when I was younger. I used to play softball (it뭩 a bit similar, I think..hehehe). Good luck on your training with Dr. [Name]. Have a nice evening!
Karla
Today, I had traning from Dr. [Name].
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OR>>Today, I trained with Dr. [Name].
He told me that I need to work on speed.
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OR>>His advice was to work on my speed.
My speed it's not very good but I'm in the good one.
>>My speed is not very good but I뭢 in a good position.
However, my control is in the line of normal so I need to train.
>>However, my control is within the normal range so I need to train.
There is the catcher and he will move.
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OR>>It is the catcher뭩 role to move.
Then the way where he goes, I need to throw that way.
>>I need to throw the ball in the direction he goes to.
Also, I need to make my feet straight to the catcher.
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OR>>Additionally, I have to keep my feet straight to the catcher.
It's hard to do that.
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OR>>It is quite challenging to do that.
Then I will make the bball speed higher to make more and more strikeouts.
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OR>>Then I will make throw the ball faster in order to make a lot of strikeouts.
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