baseball

Today, we had a big baseball training class. My speed of the ball is quite fast but, still my control is being an obstacle. OH NO! I NEED TO WORK HARDER!! I TRAINED MY CONTROL OF THE BALL AND DEFENCE> ACTUALLY< WE COUND"T DO dfence training because they were all in the same place so it's was hard to touch the ball.

Hello Joey!

This writing was pretty good with only a few errors, specifically when it comes to your spelling and punctuation marks. I hope you뭠l get the chance to work on your control soon. That is one of the harder things to overcome, so I really wish you luck. Have a great evening!

Karla

Today, we had a big baseball training class.

>>Correct

OR>>We had an intense baseball training today.
My speed of the ball is quite fast but, still my control is being an obstacle.

>>My ball speed is quite fast but still, my control is being an obstacle.

OH NO! I NEED TO WORK HARDER!!

>>Correct

I TRAINED MY CONTROL OF THE BALL AND DEFENCE>

>>Correct

OR>>I worked on my control and defense.

ACTUALLY< WE COUND"T DO dfence training because they were all in the same place so it's was hard to touch the ball.

>> ACTUALLY, WE COULDN뭈 DO defense training because they were all in the same place so it's was hard to touch the ball.