Baseball

Today, I had baseball training. I practiced quite hard so my control is going better and better. So, Dr. [Name] told me that I need to throw breaking ball to make the hitters confusing. However, it's hard for elementary students to throw breaking balls, so I'm now practicing, sinker, curve and Circle Change up. I like throwing sinker the most because I now knew that the balls that I was also throwing was sinker. I gripped the ball in the wrong way. However, the ball don't look like sinker so I need to practice more

Hi there Joey!

I like this composition because you used some technical jargons that we use in the field of baseball. You wrote this well. I noticed a few mistakes though. I hope you뭠l be able to perfect your control and your breaking ball. Have a great evening!

Karla

Today, I had baseball training.

>>Correct

OR>>I had baseball practice today.
I practiced quite hard so my control is going better and better. 

>> I practiced quite hard so my control is getting better and better.
So, Dr. [Name] told me that I need to throw breaking ball to make the hitters confusing.

>> So, Dr. [Name] told me that I need to throw breaking ball to make the hitters confused.

However, it's hard for elementary students to throw breaking balls, so I'm now practicing, sinker, curve and Circle Change up.

>>However, it's hard for elementary students to throw breaking balls, so now I뭢 practicing, sinker, curve and Circle Change up.

I like throwing sinker the most because I now knew that the balls that I was also throwing was sinker.

>> I like throwing sinker the most because I now know that the balls that I was also throwing was sinker.

I gripped the ball in the wrong way.

>>Correct

OR>> I gripped the ball incorrectly.

However, the ball don't look like sinker so I need to practice more

>> However, the ball doesn't look like sinker so I need to practice more.