baseball game
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강사 첨삭
Hi Bruce!
How\'s your day? Hope it was great!
Thank you for the information you\'ve shared. You are very kind and patient to do so. Thank you.
Your writing skill is really good but please take on the proper capitalization and punctuation marks and most especially articles: A, An and The.
Keep on practicing!
Thank you.^^
See you later Bruce.
-T.Naomi^^
Good morning, teacher Naomi.
>>correct
Yesterday I explained baseball game and here I let you know more terms about baseball game.
>>Yesterday, I explained about baseball and I wanna let you know more about the terms in baseball.
>>MLB : Major League baseball, American Baseball League, It\'s best league of the world.
>>MLB : Major League baseball, American Baseball League, It\'s the best league in the world.(always use THE when talking about superlative degree. other example: the most handsome man, the craziest teacher, the oldest woman)
game time : From one inning to nine innings. Normally about two hours.
>>Game time: From one inning to nine innings. Normally about two hours.
inning : Untill three hitters were out
>>Inning: Until three hitters are out.
in case hitter was out : when strike ball is three times, when hitted ball was cached by opposite defender before the ball was touched to the gound.
>>In case the hitter was out : when they strike three times and when the hitted ball was caught by the opposite defender or before the ball touched the ground.
strike ball : Throwed ball by picher goes to the imaginary strike zone
>>Strike: the thrown ball by the pitcher that goes to the imaginary strike zone.
earn score(point) : when hitted ball by hitter goes out gound, except foul zone, and when hitter pass through three base then get the home.
>>Scoring(point) : when the hitted ball has gone out from the gound, except foul zone, and when the hitter pass through three base then get a home.
pitcher : player who throw the ball to hitter, he should throw the ball which hitter can\'t hit the ball easily.
>>Pitcher : the player who throws the ball to the hitter, he should throw the ball which the hitter can\'t hit the ball easily.
hitter : player who hit the ball that picher throwed, if hitted ball was not catched by opposite defender, he can get to first(or second, or third) base.
>>Hitter : the player who hits the ball that the pitcher threw, if the hitted ball was not caught by the opposite defender, he can get to the first(or second, or third) base.
Thnak you.
>>Thank you.
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