Baseball instead of Basketball
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I\'m not interested about \'Basketball\'. So I will write about \'Baseball\'.
I love \'Lotte Giant\' team that people in Busan are supporting. I love that team because of supporting songs/ways.
For example, when other team did something rude to our team, we can say \"MA!!!!!\" which means \'don\'t do it\' in busan dialect.
And there are a lot of interesting songs. Lotte Giant\'s players also do they best in every game.
So I love \'Lotte Giant\' team.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for your effort!~
For example, when the other team did something rude to our team, we can say \"MA!!!!!\" which means \'don\'t do it\' in Busan dialect.
And there are a lot of interesting chants aside from the one I mentioned. Lotte Giant\'s players also do their best in every game.
So I love \'Lotte Giant\' team.
I appreciate your time in making this composition.
Keep up the good work!~
~t. Ally.
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Actually, I\'m not interested about \'Basketball\'. So I will write about \'Baseball\'.
I love \'Lotte Giant\' team that people in Busan are supporting. I love that team because of supporting songs/ways.
For example, when other team did something rude to our team, we can say \"MA!!!!!\" which means \'don\'t do it\' in busan dialect.
And there are a lot of interesting songs. Lotte Giant\'s players also do they best in every game.
So I love \'Lotte Giant\' team.
I love \'Lotte Giant\' team that people in Busan are supporting. I love that team because of supporting songs/ways.
For example, when other team did something rude to our team, we can say \"MA!!!!!\" which means \'don\'t do it\' in busan dialect.
And there are a lot of interesting songs. Lotte Giant\'s players also do they best in every game.
So I love \'Lotte Giant\' team.
>> Actually, I\'m not interested about \'Basketball\'. So I will write about \'Baseball\'.
I love the \'Lotte Giant\' team that people in Busan are supporting. I love that team because of the chants we do during games.For example, when the other team did something rude to our team, we can say \"MA!!!!!\" which means \'don\'t do it\' in Busan dialect.
And there are a lot of interesting chants aside from the one I mentioned. Lotte Giant\'s players also do their best in every game.
So I love \'Lotte Giant\' team.
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