Baseball is not in olympic games

I'm very tired thesedays because I should watch Olympic games. In this game my country South Korea has its best result. We are on a fifth place. We also got 12 gold medals in many games. But sometimes I don't feel happy with Olympic because baseball is not the proper game anymore. Why? Because of two reasons. First is the olympic mind. The biggest olympic mind is every people are equal but baseball is the game only for men. Second is Major League Baseball. During the olympic time MLB is still having there league and also they don't send there players to the national team.

Hi Nicolas, ^^ Your composition informed me well as to why baseball had been eliminated as an Olympic game. I\'m glad to know that you are really exerting an effort to enhance your grammar skills. Great job! I like it that you are putting into practice what you have learned in English. Have a wonderful time ahead! ^^ T. Michelle ( ,\") I\'m very tired thesedays because I should watch Olympic games. >>> I\'m very tired these days because I should always watch the Olympic games. In this game my country South Korea has its best result. >>> In this Olympic game, my country South Korea has its best results. We are on a fifth place. >>> Correct We also got 12 gold medals in many games. >>> CorrectBut sometimes I don\'t feel happy with Olympic because baseball is not the proper game anymore. >>> But, sometimes, I don\'t feel happy with the Olympic because baseball is not included as an official game anymore. Why? >>> CorrectBecause of two reasons. >>> CorrectFirst is the olympic mind. >>> Correct but do capitalize Olympic. >>> OR: First is the Olympic mind.The biggest olympic mind is every people are equal but baseball is the game only for men. >>> The biggest Olympic mind is that all people are equal while baseball is a game only for men. Second is Major League Baseball. >>> Correct >>> OR: Further is the Majorly League Baseball.During the olympic time MLB is still having there league and also they don\'t send there players to the national team. >>> During the Olympic event, MLB is still having their league and they also don\'t send there players to the national team.