Baseball league
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There will be a baseball contest in this week Saturdays.The opponent team is really strong team.I saw that team last week.The players were really good.I hope we can win the first contest.I think if we score much we can go to top.
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Teacher Brian,
There will be a baseball contest in this week Saturdays.
>> There will be a baseball contest this coming Saturday
The opponent team is really strong team.
>> The opponent\'s team is a strong one
I saw that team last week.
>> I saw that team last week.
The players were really good.
>>CORRECT
I hope we can win the first contest.
>> I hope we can win the first game
I think if we score much we can go to top.
>> I think if we score a lot we can be on top.
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