Baseball ticket
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Hi, [이름]!
Oh my! I\'m excited for you!
I know that you\'re a fan of KIA Tigers.
Cheer for them well if you\'re going to watch in the baseball stadium.
Thank you for telling me this.
Have a good night. Enjoy the weekend! ^^
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Next week there will be a Korean series.
>> There will be a Korean series next week.
KIA Tigers had a long break for 3weeks.
>> KIA Tigers had a long break for 3 weeks. (space)
And Dusan and Nc having a match now.
>> Dusan and NC are having a match now.
And just one team can have a match with KIA tigers.
>> Only one team can have a match with Kia Tigers.
If Dusan have a match with KIA Tigers I will go to baseball stadium.
>> If Dusan will have a match with KIA Tigers I will go to the baseball stadium.
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