Baseball will win homework.

2016-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Today,KIA Tigers have a game.But I can see the game a lot.I think PostSeason is amazing.Yesterday,KIA Tigers win the game.LG's Oh Ji Hyuan missed the ball.And KIA's pitcher did well.And Kim Sun Bin did well at catching.I have to math and English homework.I will do homework very fast and watch a game.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!   I noticed how excited you are in watching Kia Tigers baseball game. Good luck to your favorite team! Especially to your favorite player, Kim Jun Chan. Enjoy watching the game my dear after doing your homework. See you on Thursday!   _Teacher Dianne   Today,KIA Tigers have a game. But I can see the game a lot. >> Kia Tigers has a game today and I can see or watch the game a lot. I think PostSeason is amazing. >> I think the post season is amazing. Yesterday,KIA Tigers win the game. >> Kia Tigers won the game yesterday. LG\'s Oh Ji Hyuan missed the ball. >> Correct And KIA\'s pitcher did well. >> Correct And Kim Sun Bin did well at catching. >> Correct I have to math and English homework. >> I have to do my Math and English homework. I will do homework very fast and watch a game. >> I will do my homework very fast and watch the game after.

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