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Yesterday, my team didn't have a match because of rain.In previous game,we lose the game to Hwanha.When KIA's best pitcher Yang Hyeon Jong do pitching our team always lose the game.Yang hyeon jong do well but he hitted solo homerun to Kim Tae Guen.Yesterday Dusan lose the game.Dusan didn't turn the table in 9 inning.
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Hi there [이름]?
How was it going?
I hope you had a great day.
Anyways, I\'m so sorry to hear that u weren\'t able to have your game yesterday because of the rain.
I hope that your team will have a better luck next time.
Just like baseball, learning English and in general also takes time to be better or even be the best.
You just have to keep on practicing and I know you will get there. ^.^
I corrected some of your sentences below. Feel free to check them out.
Let me know how it goes on your next game.
Go fourth and conquer! Fighting (^_^)/
Always,
Teacher Kris
Yesterday, my team didn\'t have a match because of rain.
>>>Yesterday, my team didn\'t have a match because it rained.
OR:
>>>Yesterday, my team didn\'t have a game because it rained
In previous game,we lose the game to Hwanha.
>>>In our previous game, we were defeated by Hwanha.
When KIA\'s best pitcher Yang Hyeon Jong do pitching our team always lose the game.
>>>When KIA\'s best pitcher, which is Yang Hyeon Jong do the pitching, our team always lose the game.
Yang hyeon jong do well but he hitted solo homerun to Kim Tae Guen.
>>>Yang Hyeon Jong did well but he hit the home-run solo to Kim Tae Guen.
Yesterday Dusan lose the game.
>>>Yesterday, Dusan lost the game.
OR:
>>>Yesterday, Dusan was defeated in the game.
Dusan didn\'t turn the table in 9 inning.
>>>Dusan didn\'t turn the table during the 9 innings.
>>>Yesterday, my team didn\'t have a match because it rained.
OR:
>>>Yesterday, my team didn\'t have a game because it rained
In previous game,we lose the game to Hwanha.
>>>In our previous game, we were defeated by Hwanha.
When KIA\'s best pitcher Yang Hyeon Jong do pitching our team always lose the game.
>>>When KIA\'s best pitcher, which is Yang Hyeon Jong do the pitching, our team always lose the game.
Yang hyeon jong do well but he hitted solo homerun to Kim Tae Guen.
>>>Yang Hyeon Jong did well but he hit the home-run solo to Kim Tae Guen.
Yesterday Dusan lose the game.
>>>Yesterday, Dusan lost the game.
OR:
>>>Yesterday, Dusan was defeated in the game.
Dusan didn\'t turn the table in 9 inning.
>>>Dusan didn\'t turn the table during the 9 innings.
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