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Hi [이름]. ^^
How was your day today?
I hope everything\'s great. ^^
Anyways, thank you again for sharing such news about your team.
May your team win great matches so that they will not go down the ranks. ^^
Well, you are improving in completing the thought of your sentences.
You are doing good telling your stories in detail. ^^
Anyhow, I corrected your output.
Take note of the usual errors you commit like making incomplete sentences.
Also, take a closer look at words with wrong spellings.
See you on our next class. ^^
Take care always. ^^
Always,
Teacher Kris
KIA Tigers some pitcher injured.
>> Some of the KIA Tigers\' pitchers were injured.
Yun Seok Min,Sim Dong Seup,Han Seung Hyeok,Kim yun dong,Im [Name] hyeok.
>> They were Yun Suk Min, Shim Dong Seop, Han Seung Hyeok, Kim Yun Dong and Im [Name] Hyeok.
These days we did not do well.
>> Correct!
1win 4lose.
>> We had one win and four loses.
Last week KIA\'s score.
>> That was KIA\'s score last week.
Hwanha is catcing KIA.
>> Hwanwha is catching up with KIA.
When Hwanha win 3game in a row and KIA failed 3game in a row,KIA ranking will be the worst ranking.
>> If Hwanwha will win three games in a row and KIA fails three consecutive games, KIA\'s ranking will be the worst.
Dusan and Sk is good these days.
>> Dusan and SK are doing good these days.
Nc Dinosaur Eric did well for 15game.
>> NC Dino\'s Eric Thames did well for the 15th game.
OR:
>> NC Dino\'s Eric Hacker did well for the 15th game.
He hitted 3 homerun and score 15.
>> He hit three homeruns and scored fifteen points.
My team have to do well.
>> My team has to do well.
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