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Oh my goodness.Our team's ranking is also 9.We go to the 6ranking last Thrusday.But we lose the game for three games.Yang Hyeon Jong do well but he couldn't win becuase of batters.Dusan's No Gyeng Won stopped baseball.These days NC Dinos do well.When NC win 2game in a row,they can be a top.
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Hi [이름]. (^.^)/
I hope you had a superb Tuesday!
Your ability to construct grammars has improved.
Although, there are still rooms for improvement.
I corrected some of your sentences bellow, so feel very free to check them out.
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Always,
Teacher Kris ^^
Oh my goodness.
>>> Oh my goodness!
Our team\'s ranking is also 9.
>>> Our team ranked ninth.
We go to the 6ranking last Thrusday.
>>> We ranked sixth last Thursday.
But we lose the game for three games.
>>> But we lose the game three times.
OR:
>>> But we were beaten three times.
Yang Hyeon Jong do well but he couldn\'t win becuase of batters.
>>> Yang Hyeon Jong did well but he couldn\'t win because of the batters.
Dusan\'s No Gyeng Won stopped baseball.
>>> Dusan\'s No Gyeng Won stopped playing baseball.
These days NC Dinos do well.
>>>NC Dinos did well these days.
When NC win 2game in a row,they can be a top.
>>>If NC will win two consecutive times, they will be at the top.
>>> Oh my goodness!
Our team\'s ranking is also 9.
>>> Our team ranked ninth.
We go to the 6ranking last Thrusday.
>>> We ranked sixth last Thursday.
But we lose the game for three games.
>>> But we lose the game three times.
OR:
>>> But we were beaten three times.
Yang Hyeon Jong do well but he couldn\'t win becuase of batters.
>>> Yang Hyeon Jong did well but he couldn\'t win because of the batters.
Dusan\'s No Gyeng Won stopped baseball.
>>> Dusan\'s No Gyeng Won stopped playing baseball.
These days NC Dinos do well.
>>>NC Dinos did well these days.
When NC win 2game in a row,they can be a top.
>>>If NC will win two consecutive times, they will be at the top.
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