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2016-05-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Yesterday,we won the game.Lee Bam ho and Brat [이름] do well.These days KIA's batter do well.Key Player:Brat [이름],Lee Bum ho,Kim Joo chan,Na Ji wan.My basketball coach's fan is Hwanha.But when we talk about baseball now he feels a little bad.Because his team 's score is really bad.Yesterday, Nexen is good.Jung lee yun do well.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

I guess you are happy today because of the good news.

Congratulations to your team! ^^

May they win the championship. :)

By the way, please study your corrections below.
Thank you and have a nice day ahead.

See you in class. :)


~~ Teacher Kris


Yesterday,we won the game.

>> Correct

Lee Bam ho and Brat [이름] do well.

>> Lee Bam ho and Brat [이름] did well.

These days KIA\'s batter do well.

>> These days KIA\'s batter is doing well.

Key Player:Brat [이름],Lee Bum ho,Kim Joo chan,Na Ji wan.

>> Correct

My basketball coach\'s fan is Hwanha.

>> Correct

But when we talk about baseball now he feels a little bad. Because his team \'s score is really bad.

>> But when we talk about baseball, he feels little bad because the score of his team is really bad.

Yesterday, Nexen is good.

>> Yesterday, Nexen did good.

Jung lee yun do well.

>> Jung lee yun did well in the game.

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