Baseball13
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Hi [이름]! ^^
I guess you are happy today because of the good news.
Congratulations to your team! ^^
May they win the championship. :)
By the way, please study your corrections below.
Thank you and have a nice day ahead.
See you in class. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
Yesterday,we won the game.
>> Correct
Lee Bam ho and Brat [이름] do well.
>> Lee Bam ho and Brat [이름] did well.
These days KIA\'s batter do well.
>> These days KIA\'s batter is doing well.
Key Player:Brat [이름],Lee Bum ho,Kim Joo chan,Na Ji wan.
>> Correct
My basketball coach\'s fan is Hwanha.
>> Correct
But when we talk about baseball now he feels a little bad. Because his team \'s score is really bad.
>> But when we talk about baseball, he feels little bad because the score of his team is really bad.
Yesterday, Nexen is good.
>> Yesterday, Nexen did good.
Jung lee yun do well.
>> Jung lee yun did well in the game.
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