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Yeh!My favorite team KIA Tigers ranking 5.Na Ji Wan and Lee Bum Ho,Seo Dong Wook really do well.O Jun Hyeok really good player now.We won in a row for 5 games.Today my team's pitcher is zeke.Samsung Lions Balester released.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Congratulations on your team.
You really are happy of the results.
More power to your team! ^^
~~ Teacher Kris
Yeh!My favorite team KIA Tigers ranking 5.
>> Yehey! My favorite team, The KIA Tigers, ranks number 5!
Na Ji Wan and Lee Bum Ho,Seo Dong Wook really do well.
>> Na Ji Wan, Lee Bum Ho, and Seo Dong Wook really did well in the game.
O Jun Hyeok really good player now.
>> O Jun Hyeok reall is a good player.
We won in a row for 5 games.
>> We won 5 games in a row.
Today my team\'s pitcher is zeke.
>> Today, my team\'s pitcher is Zeke.
Samsung Lions Balester released.
>> Samsung Lion Balester was released.
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