Baseball15
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^6
Seems the battle went well. :)
Good luck to your team, KIA. I hope that they will rank number one soon.
Keep supporting them. :)
Have a great night! ^^
See you. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
My favorite team KIA Tigers ranking is 7 now.
>> My favorite team, KIA Tigers, now ranks number 7.
KIA is strong at home game.
>> Correct
Today\'s intersting story is Dusan\'s 30win or Hwanha\'s 30lose.
>> Today\'s interesting story is Dusan\'s 30 wins and Hwansha\'s 30 losses.
Our team\'s batter still do well.
>> Our team\'s batter is still doing well.
Dusan is almost always do well.
>> Dusan is almost doing well.
But my fan is always KIA.
>> But, my I am always a fan of KIA.
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