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KIA's ranking is 8.Yesterday we lose the game.Yang Hyeon Jong didn't do well.Dusan and KT game was a little interesting.NC Dinos Lee Jea Hack do very well.These days Brat [이름] did not come to the stadium.I want to see Brat [이름].
강사 첨삭
Hi Tomymy [이름]!
Good evening! ^^
Brat [이름] really is your idol.
Maybe you will see Brat [이름] in the next game. :)
Don\'t worry about it.
See you in class. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
KIA\'s ranking is 8.
>> Correct
Yesterday we lose the game.
>> Yesterday, we lose the game.
Yang Hyeon Jong didn\'t do well.
>> Correct
Dusan and KT game was a little interesting.
>> Correct
NC Dinos Lee Jea Hack do very well.
>> NC Dinos Lee Jea Hack did very well in the game.
These days Brat [이름] did not come to the stadium.
>> These days, Brat [이름] did not come to the stadium.
I want to see Brat [이름].
>> Correct
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