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2016-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

KIA's ranking is 8.Yesterday we lose the game.Yang Hyeon Jong didn't do well.Dusan and KT game was a little interesting.NC Dinos Lee Jea Hack do very well.These days Brat [이름] did not come to the stadium.I want to see Brat [이름].

강사 첨삭

Hi Tomymy [이름]!

Good evening! ^^

Brat [이름] really is your idol.

Maybe you will see Brat [이름] in the next game. :)

Don\'t worry about it.

See you in class. :)


~~ Teacher Kris


KIA\'s ranking is 8.

>> Correct

Yesterday we lose the game.

>> Yesterday, we lose the game.

Yang Hyeon Jong didn\'t do well.

>> Correct

Dusan and KT game was a little interesting.

>> Correct

NC Dinos Lee Jea Hack do very well.

>> NC Dinos Lee Jea Hack did very well in the game.

These days Brat [이름] did not come to the stadium.

>> These days, Brat [이름] did not come to the stadium.

I want to see Brat [이름].

>> Correct

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