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I hate NC Dinos.NC are really strong at KIA.Today I think my team will win.Because today's pitcher Yang Hyeon Jong really strong at LG Twins.Because of NC my team's ranking is 8.When KIA win this game there is a chance of being 7.I hope my team will be win.Ranking 7 will be more good than ranking 8.Yun Seok Min have to come back.On July I can see Im [Name] Yong and I can see An Chi Hong and Kim Seon Bin later.

    Hello [이름]! Happy Tuesday! Thank you for answering your homework yesterday. I appreciate your effort in doing and passing it on time. However, there are still some corrections that I\'ve noticed in your composition. Kindly read what I wrote and try to apply it on our next activity. Thank you. I hate NC Dinos. >>> CORRECTION: I hate NC Dinos! OR: I do not like NC Dinos. NC are really strong at KIA. >>> CORRECTION: The NC Dinos team is stronger than the KIA tigers. OR: you can connect this to your first sentence using the word \"because\". You can say: I hate NC Dinos because their team is stronger than the KIA tigers. Today I think my team will win. >>>CORRECTION: Today, I think my team will win the game. Because today\'s pitcher Yang Hyeon Jong really strong at LG Twins. >>>CORRECTION: Our Pitcher for today is Yang Hyeon jong who is really strong and good at the LG Twins. Because of NC my team\'s ranking is 8.When KIA win this game there is a chance of being 7. >>>CORRECTION: We lost the game with team NC Dinos. We were ranked as number 8 but we still have a chance to be in the number 7 spot if Team KIA will win this game. I hope my team will be win. >>>CORRECTION: I hope my team will win this game. Ranking 7 will be more good than ranking 8. >>>CORRECTION: It will feel a lot more better to be ranked as number 7 than number 8. Yun Seok Min have to come back. >>>CORRECTION: Yun Seok Min should come back. On July I can see Im [Name] Yong and I can see An Chi Hong and Kim Seon Bin later. >>>CORRECTION: I will be meeting Im chang Yong, An Chi Hong, and Kim Seon Bin on July.