Baseball18

2016-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Yesterday my favorite baseball team win the game.The pitcher do well.Brat [이름] and Lee Bum Ho do multi hit.I am satisfied at the game.New batter Lee Jin yeong run very fast.But my favorite baseball team ranking is 8.Im [Name] Hyeok will come back to KIA.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

I am so sorry your team lose the game.

I think your team needs a lot of practice to win the next game. :)

Your team can make it. :)


~~ Teacher Kris


Yesterday my favorite baseball team win the game.

>> Yesterday, my favorite baseball team won the game.

The pitcher do well.

>> The pitcher did well.

Brat [이름] and Lee Bum Ho do multi hit.

>> Brat [이름] and Lee Bum did the multi hit.

I am satisfied at the game.

>> I am satisfied with the game.

New batter Lee Jin yeong run very fast.

>> The new batter who is Lee Jin Yeong ran very fast.

But my favorite baseball team ranking is 8.

>> But, my favorite baseball team ranked number 8.

Im [Name] Hyeok will come back to KIA.

>> Im [Name] Hyeon will go back to KIA.

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