Baseball18
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
I am so sorry your team lose the game.
I think your team needs a lot of practice to win the next game. :)
Your team can make it. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
Yesterday my favorite baseball team win the game.
>> Yesterday, my favorite baseball team won the game.
The pitcher do well.
>> The pitcher did well.
Brat [이름] and Lee Bum Ho do multi hit.
>> Brat [이름] and Lee Bum did the multi hit.
I am satisfied at the game.
>> I am satisfied with the game.
New batter Lee Jin yeong run very fast.
>> The new batter who is Lee Jin Yeong ran very fast.
But my favorite baseball team ranking is 8.
>> But, my favorite baseball team ranked number 8.
Im [Name] Hyeok will come back to KIA.
>> Im [Name] Hyeon will go back to KIA.
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