Baseball19
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
I appreciate your effort in taking the time to share something about baseball. However, there are still some corrections that I\'ve noticed in your composition. Kindly read what I wrote and try to apply it on our next activity. Thank you and always take care :)
~~ Teacher Kris
Tigers have to wake up.
>> correct.
OR:
>> Tigers needs to be awaken.
Always Kim Ju Chan do well. But another players don\'t do well.
>> Kim Ju Chan is always doing well, but other players don\'t do well.
OR:
>> Kim Ju Chan is always doing great, unlike other players who are not doing good in playing baseball.
Lower team is catcing KIA Tigers.
>> Lower team is going to win the game over the KIA tigers.
There are no good pitchers these days.
>> Good pitchers are becoming rare nowadays.
Today, my team lose the game.
>> Correct
OR:
>> My team lose the game today.
Just Kim Ju Chan do well and Kim Ju Hyeong\'s score is really bad.
>> Only Kim Ju Chan did well and Kim Ju Hyeong\'s score was really bad.
OR:
>> Kim Ju Hyeong\'s score is getting low while Kim Ju Chan is the only player who is doing great.
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