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My team's KIA Tigers lose the 5games in a row.I think I have to wait for until July.But I hope my team will be the ranking 7 unitil July.We should win the game.Today,KIA pitcher is Im [Name] Hyoek.He is come to KIA today.Han Sung Hyoek,KIm Yun Dong,Sim Dong Seop,Yun seok Min will be come.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Good evening!
I am so sorry to hear that your team lose 5 games today.
I hope that your team will win the next games.
Cheer up and please don\'t feel so bad.
See you in class^^
~~ Teacher Kris
>> My team, KIA tigers lose 5 games in a row.
I think I have to wait for until July.
>> I think I have to wait until July.
But I hope my team will be the ranking 7 unitil July.
>> But I hope my team will be in rank 7 until July.
We should win the game.
>> Correct
OR:
>> My team should win the next games.
Today,KIA pitcher is Im [Name] Hyoek.
>> Correct
OR:
>> KIA pitcher today is Im [Name] Hyoek.
He is come to KIA today.
YOU MEAN TO SAY:
>>He came for KIA today.
Han Sung Hyoek,KIm Yun Dong,Sim Dong Seop,Yun seok Min will be come.>> Han Sung Hyoek, KIm Yun Dong, Sim Dong Seop, and Yun seok Min will come.YOU MEAN TO SAY:
>> Han Sung Hyoek, KIm Yun Dong, Sim Dong Seop, and Yun seok Min will join the team today.
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