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2016-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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My team's ranking is 8.Last game my team lose the game. We did well but the later pitcher didn't do well.Dusan and Hwanha won the game in the end last game.I think KIA's pitcher have to do well.

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Hi [이름]!   Thank you for sending your composition. It\'s ok to lose but don\'t forget to continue fighting for your dreams. Just be optimist about it and learn to be grateful for all the things that you still have.   ~~Teacher Kris   My team\'s ranking is 8. >>My team\'s ranking is number 8. OR: My team is in the 8th place. Last game my team lose the game. >>My team lost the last game.We did well but the later pitcher didn\'t do well. >> We did well but one pitcher didn\'t perform his role properly.  Dusan and Hwanha won the game in the end last game. >> Dusan and Hwanha won at the end of the last game. I think KIA\'s pitcher have to do well. >>I think the KIA\'s pitcher needs to do well next time.

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