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2016-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Last game we won the game.Seo Dong wook hit a grand slam.When I went to stadium,the batters and pitchers didn't do well.Today,we have a game with Lotte.Maybe,I can go to the baseball stadium September.Because that time we go to the Gangju and there is a stadium near my grandparents house.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^

I am sorry to hear that your team lose the game.

Don\'t worry, there is still next time. And, maybe, they will win the

next game. :)

See you in class. :)


~~ Teacher Kris


Last game we won the game.

>> Correct

Seo Dong wook hit a grand slam.

>> Correct

When I went to stadium,the batters and pitchers didn\'t do well.

>> When I went to the stadium, the batters and the pitchers didn\'t do well in the game.

Today,we have a game with Lotte.

>> Correct

Maybe,I can go to the baseball stadium September.

>> Maybe I will go to the baseball stadium in September.

Because that time we go to the Gangju and there is a stadium near my grandparents house

>> Because, at that time, we will go to Ganju and there is a stadium near my grandparent\'s house.

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