Baseball22
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
I am sorry to hear that your team lose the game.
Don\'t worry, there is still next time. And, maybe, they will win the
next game. :)
See you in class. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
Last game we won the game.
>> Correct
Seo Dong wook hit a grand slam.
>> Correct
When I went to stadium,the batters and pitchers didn\'t do well.
>> When I went to the stadium, the batters and the pitchers didn\'t do well in the game.
Today,we have a game with Lotte.
>> Correct
Maybe,I can go to the baseball stadium September.
>> Maybe I will go to the baseball stadium in September.
Because that time we go to the Gangju and there is a stadium near my grandparents house
>> Because, at that time, we will go to Ganju and there is a stadium near my grandparent\'s house.
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