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2016-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

We won the game yesterday.I was satisfied at last game.Becuase we won the game 7:0.It was an amazing score.KT didn't score at KIA.And Yang Hyeon Jong did great.Today KIA Tigers pitcher is Heckter.My hope is at ranking 5 or ranking 4.KIA Tiger ranking is at 6 now. KIA Tigers vs KT KBS Sports

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Hi [이름]! ^^ :)

Good afternoon :)

Congratulations to your team! ^^

I told you, they would won the game.

I think that calls for a celebration! ^^

See you in class [이름]! ^^


~~ Teacher Kris


We won the game yesterday.

>> Correct

I was satisfied at last game. Becuase we won the game 7:0.

>> I was satisfied on the last game because we won the game by 7:0.

It was an amazing score.

>> Correct

KT didn\'t score at KIA.

>> Correct

And Yang Hyeon Jong did great.

>> Correct

Today KIA Tigers pitcher is Heckter.

>> Correct

My hope is at ranking 5 or ranking 4.

>> Correct

KIA Tiger ranking is at 6 now.

>> KIA Tiger\'s ranking is at 6 now.
KIA Tigers vs KT
KB
S Sports

>> Correct

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