Baseball31
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
The competition between Lotte Giants and
KIA Tigers is tight! ^^
They really are doing their best .
May the best team wins. ^^
See you in class. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
Today,KIA Tigers win the game.
>> Today, KIA Tigers won the game.
Now is Friday.
>> Correct
Yesterday(On Thursday)we lose the game at Lotte Giant.
>> Yesterday, Thursday, we lose the game VS Lotte Giants.
So,I was worried about KIA Tigers.Because Lotte and KIA\'s rankign was -2.Today,we had a game with NC.
>> So, I was worried about KIA Tigers because Lotte and KIA ranked second. Today, we had a game with NC.
KIA\'s pitcher is Hong Gyeon Hee,who really throw well last game.
>> KIA\'s pitcher, Hone Gyeon Hee, threw well on the last game.
Lee Bum Ho hitted Grand Slam and Kim Joo Chan hitted three run homerun.
>> Correct
But Lotte won too.
>> But, Lotte won too.
I really hate Lotte Giant.Lotte Giant have to lose the game.
>> I really hate Lotte Giants. Lotte Giants has to loose the game.
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