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2016-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Now KIA Tigers having a game with KT.We are winning now.But I don't what team win.3:0 Today KIA's pitcher doing well.And Na Zi Wan hitted 3-run homerun.Kim Joo Chan is hurt now.Kim Joo Chan will back after a month.Brett Pill,Na Zi Wan,Lee Bum Ho have to do well.Pitchers have to do well.Sin Jong Gill have to hit many hit.No Su Gang have to do his best and have to do his mission almost perfect.Brett [이름]l have to hit many hit and hit when the team has important inning.Na Zi Wan have to hit homerun and do as a 4batter.He is not a Captian.But he have to do as a Captian because Kim Joo Chan is hurt.Lee Bum Ho have to do well.Now,team have a hard time.So,Captian have to do well.Seo Dong wook have to go to 1base many time.He is the leader of the lower batter. Kim Won Sup is doing well.Baek Yong Hwan and Lee Hong Gu have to do well be a stable catcher.Gang Han Wool is doing well too.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^

I can feel that you are worried about the results

of the game. Cross fingers! ^^

Good luck to your team.
I am so excited about the results of the game. :)

See you in class. :)


~~ Teacher Kris


Now KIA Tigers having a game with KT.

>> Now, KIA Tigers is having a game with KT.

We are winning now.But I don\'t what team win.3:0

>> We are winning now but I don\'t know what team won by 3:0.
 Today KIA\'s pitcher doing well.

>> Today, pitchers from KIA Tigers are doing well.

And Na Zi Wan hitted 3-run homerun.

>> Na Zi Wan hit 3 homeruns.

Kim Joo Chan is hurt now.

>> Kim Joo Chan is hurt.

Kim Joo Chan will back after a month.

>> Kim Joo Chan will be back after a month.

Brett Pill,Na Zi Wan,Lee Bum Ho have to do well.

>> Brett Pill, Na Zi Wan and Lee Bum are doing well.

Pitchers have to do well.

>> Pitchers are doing well too.

Sin Jong Gill have to hit many hit.

>> Sin Jong Gill has a lot of hits.

No Su Gang have to do his best and have to do his mission almost perfect.

>> No Su Gang is doing his best and is doing his mission almost perfectly.

Brett [이름]l have to hit many hit and hit when the team has important inning.

>> Brett Pill is making many hits when the team is having important innings.

Na Zi Wan have to hit homerun and do as a 4batter.

>> Na zi Wan is making homeruns and he does as the fourth batter.

He is not a Captian.But he have to do as a Captian because Kim Joo Chan is hurt.Lee Bum Ho have to do well.

>> He is not a Captain but he has to the work of a Captain because Kim Joo Chan is hurt. Lee Bum Ho is doing well.

Now,team have a hard time.So,Captian have to do well.

>> Now, the team is having a hard time so the Captain must do well.

Seo Dong wook have to go to 1base many time.

>> Seo Dong Wook goes to the first base for many times.

He is the leader of the lower batter.

>> Correct
 Kim Won Sup is doing well.Baek Yong Hwan and Lee Hong Gu have to do well be a stable catcher.

>> Kim Won Sup is doing well. Baek Yong Hwan and Lee Hong Gu are doing well as stable catchers.

Gang Han Wool is doing well too.

>> Correct

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