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Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening! ^^
I can feel that you are worried about the results
of the game. Cross fingers! ^^
Good luck to your team.
I am so excited about the results of the game. :)
See you in class. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
Now KIA Tigers having a game with KT.
>> Now, KIA Tigers is having a game with KT.
We are winning now.But I don\'t what team win.3:0
>> We are winning now but I don\'t know what team won by 3:0.
Today KIA\'s pitcher doing well.
>> Today, pitchers from KIA Tigers are doing well.
And Na Zi Wan hitted 3-run homerun.
>> Na Zi Wan hit 3 homeruns.
Kim Joo Chan is hurt now.
>> Kim Joo Chan is hurt.
Kim Joo Chan will back after a month.
>> Kim Joo Chan will be back after a month.
Brett Pill,Na Zi Wan,Lee Bum Ho have to do well.
>> Brett Pill, Na Zi Wan and Lee Bum are doing well.
Pitchers have to do well.
>> Pitchers are doing well too.
Sin Jong Gill have to hit many hit.
>> Sin Jong Gill has a lot of hits.
No Su Gang have to do his best and have to do his mission almost perfect.
>> No Su Gang is doing his best and is doing his mission almost perfectly.
Brett [이름]l have to hit many hit and hit when the team has important inning.
>> Brett Pill is making many hits when the team is having important innings.
Na Zi Wan have to hit homerun and do as a 4batter.
>> Na zi Wan is making homeruns and he does as the fourth batter.
He is not a Captian.But he have to do as a Captian because Kim Joo Chan is hurt.Lee Bum Ho have to do well.
>> He is not a Captain but he has to the work of a Captain because Kim Joo Chan is hurt. Lee Bum Ho is doing well.
Now,team have a hard time.So,Captian have to do well.
>> Now, the team is having a hard time so the Captain must do well.
Seo Dong wook have to go to 1base many time.
>> Seo Dong Wook goes to the first base for many times.
He is the leader of the lower batter.
>> Correct
Kim Won Sup is doing well.Baek Yong Hwan and Lee Hong Gu have to do well be a stable catcher.
>> Kim Won Sup is doing well. Baek Yong Hwan and Lee Hong Gu are doing well as stable catchers.
Gang Han Wool is doing well too.
>> Correct
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