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Hi [이름]! ^^
Congratulations to KIA Tigers! ^^
Wow! They really are doing their best! ^^
Clap! Clap! Clap! :)
~~ Teacher Kris
Wow!We are winnig KT in a row.
>> Wow! We are winning over KT in a row.
I know KT is not good at baseball.
>> Correct
Yesterday Lotte lose the game.
>> Yesterday, Lotte lose the game.
So,we have a -2 with Lottte Giant.
>> So, we are ahead of with Lotte Giants.
Brett [이름]l hitted Grand Slam on Tuseday.
>> Brett [이름] hit the grand slam on Tuesday.
Yesterday,KT hitted homerun first.
>> Yesterday, KT hit the homerun first.
But Lee Bum Ho(KIA)hitted 2base hit 2time.
>> But, Lee Bum Ho of KIA Tigers hit the 2nd base for 2 times.
We won the game.Today KIA Tigers is winning now.
>> Correct
Now maybe the score is 6:0
>> Maybe now, the score is 6:0
Hong Gun Hee vs Ju Gun
>> Correct
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