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We have to win.KIA ranking is at 5.Today is Dusan and KIA.Dusan is really strong team.And today Dusan's pitcher is really good pitcher.Sk have to lose game.And KIA have to win.
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Hello [이름]!
Good evening!
I hope your team is going to win today.
I can see that they are a very strong team.
Thank you for sharing.
~~ Teacher Kris
We have to win.
>>Correct
OR: We have to win the game.
KIA ranking is at 5.
>> KIA\'s ranking is at 5.
Today is Dusan and KIA.
>>Today is Dusan and KIA\'s match.
Dusan is really strong team.
>> Dusan is really a strong team.
And today Dusan\'s pitcher is really good pitcher.
>> And Dusan\'s pitcher is really good.
Sk have to lose game.
>> Sk has to lose the game.
And KIA have to win.
>> KIA must win the game.
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