Baseball35
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! It\'s good to hear from you. :)
Thank you for sharing with me about your favorite baseball team. :)
I\'m sorry to hear that some of the players got hurt but I do hope they win the championships.
You did a very good job on your essay today.
Continue practicing and I\'ll see you soon in class! :)
------Teacher Kris
KIA Tigers ranking at 5.
>> KIA Tigers ranked fifth.
KIA Tigers have a match with Kt wiz today.
>> Correct
KIA Tigers has a bad news.
>> KIA Tigers has bad news.
Brett [이름]l and No Sun Guang hurt.
>> Brett [이름]l and No Sun Guang got hurt.
And Zeke hurt too.
>> And Zeke was hurt too.
I don\'t like Zeke because these days Zeke score\'s bad.
>> I don\'t like Zeke these days because he score\'s bad.
When the pitcher Zeke these days we didn\'t win.
>> When Zeke was the pitcher, we didn\'t win.
OR:
>> Every time Zeke pitches, we don\'t win.
When KIA do well this week will be a good game.
>> When KIA will do well this week, it will be a good game.
KIA is strong at KT,Lotte,LG.
>> KIA is stronger than KT, Lotte, and LG.
Today\'s pitcher Hong Gun Hee vs Ju Gun
>> Today\'s pitcher was Hong Gun Hee vs. Ju Gun.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.