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2016-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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KIA Tigers ranking at 5.KIA Tigers have a match with Kt wiz today.KIA Tigers has a bad news.Brett [이름]l and No Sun Guang hurt.And Zeke hurt too.I don't like Zeke because these days Zeke score's bad.When the pitcher Zeke these days we didn't win. When KIA do well this week will be a good game.KIA is strong at KT,Lotte,LG. Today's pitcher Hong Gun Hee vs Ju Gun

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! It\'s good to hear from you. :)

Thank you for sharing with me about your favorite baseball team. :)

I\'m sorry to hear that some of the players got hurt but I do hope they win the championships.

You did a very good job on your essay today.

Continue practicing and I\'ll see you soon in class! :)

------Teacher Kris



KIA Tigers ranking at 5.

>> KIA Tigers ranked fifth.

KIA Tigers have a match with Kt wiz today.

>> Correct

KIA Tigers has a bad news.

>> KIA Tigers has bad news.

Brett [이름]l and No Sun Guang hurt.

>> Brett [이름]l and No Sun Guang got hurt.

And Zeke hurt too.

>> And Zeke was hurt too.

I don\'t like Zeke because these days Zeke score\'s bad.

>> I don\'t like Zeke these days because he score\'s bad.

When the pitcher Zeke these days we didn\'t win.

>> When Zeke was the pitcher, we didn\'t win.

OR:

>> Every time Zeke pitches, we don\'t win.
When KIA do well this week will be a good game.

>> When KIA will do well this week, it will be a good game.

KIA is strong at KT,Lotte,LG.

>> KIA is stronger than KT, Lotte, and LG.
Today\'s pitcher Hong Gun Hee vs Ju Gun

>> Today\'s pitcher was Hong Gun Hee vs. Ju Gun.

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