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KIA Tigers didn't have a game with Kt yesterday because of rain.KIA lose last game.Gang han wool didn't do well and Hong Gun Hee's score was bad.KIA is serious now.
Brett [이름] and No Su Guang,Zeke is hurt so they are out.No Su Gang hurt his finger when he running.In that case,No Su Gang have to cure it for a month.Today KIA Tigers have a game with Lotte Giant.
Today's pitcher
Go Hyoeu Jun vs No Gyeon Un
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Hi [이름]!
Thank you so much for sharing this.
I hope your team will win the game.
As they say Believing is the first step to win.
So if your team believes that they can win game then they will surely win the game.
~~~Teacher Kris
KIA Tigers didn\'t have a game with Kt yesterday because of rain.
>>> KIA Tigers didn\'t have a game with KT yesterday because it rained.
KIA lose last game.
>>> KIA lost in the last game.
Gang han wool didn\'t do well and Hong Gun Hee\'s score was bad.
>>> Gang Han Wool didn\'t do well while Hong Gun Hee\'s scores were bad.
KIA is serious now.
>>> Correct
OR: Now, KIA is serious. Brett [이름] and No Su Guang,Zeke is hurt so they are out.
>>> Bret [이름], No Su Guang and Zeke are hurt so, they are out.
No Su Gang hurt his finger when he running.
>>> No Sung Gang hurt his finger while he is running.
In that case,No Su Gang have to cure it for a month.
>>> As a result, No Su Gang have to let his wound heal for a month.
Today KIA Tigers have a game with Lotte Giant.
>>> Today KIA Tigers have a game againts Lotte Giant.Today\'s pitcher Go Hyoeu Jun vs No Gyeon Un
>>> Today\'s pither are Go Hyoeu Jun vs. No Gyeon Un.
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