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My team ranking is at 5.KIA Tigers lose the last game.Today's game is NC vs KIA.Brett [이름] come back and Baek Young Hwan come back.This week's will be a hard week.KIA Tigers have to win.
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Hi [이름]!^^
You\'ve done great today!^^
I do hope that on the next game KIA Tigers will win the game. Keep cheering!^^
See you in our class. Enjoy the rest of the day. :)
--Teacher Kris :)
My team ranking is at 5.
>> Correct
KIA Tigers lose the last game.
>> Correct
Today\'s game is NC vs KIA.
>> Correct
OR:
>> The game for this day is NC vs. KIA.
Brett [이름] come back and Baek Young Hwan come back.
>> Both Brett [이름] and Baek Young came back.
This week\'s will be a hard week.
>> This week will be tough.
KIA Tigers have to win.
>> KIA Tigers has to win.
OR:
>> KIA Tigers need to win.
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