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2016-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

My team ranking is at 5.KIA Tigers lose the last game.Today's game is NC vs KIA.Brett [이름] come back and Baek Young Hwan come back.This week's will be a hard week.KIA Tigers have to win.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!^^

You\'ve done great today!^^

I do hope that on the next game KIA Tigers will win the game. Keep cheering!^^

See you in our class. Enjoy the rest of the day. :)

--Teacher Kris :)


My team ranking is at 5.

>> Correct

KIA Tigers lose the last game.

>> Correct

Today\'s game is NC vs KIA.

>> Correct

OR:

>> The game for this day is NC vs. KIA.

Brett [이름] come back and Baek Young Hwan come back.

>> Both Brett [이름] and Baek Young came back.

This week\'s will be a hard week.

>> This week will be tough.

KIA Tigers have to win.

>> KIA Tigers has to win.

OR:

>> KIA Tigers need to win.

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