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KIA Tigers won the last game.Lee Bum Ho and Brett [이름] and Na Zi Wan hitted homerun.We won the game from NC.Today KIA Tigers have a game with Samsung Lions.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Wow! Tigers VS Lions! ^^
Good luck to them.
This is going to be wild! ^^
You better watch the battle between the two teams. :)
Cheer for them. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
KIA Tigers won the last game.
>> Correct
Lee Bum Ho and Brett [이름] and Na Zi Wan hitted homerun.
>> Lee Bum Ho, Brett [이름], and Na Zi hit the homerun.
We won the game from NC.
>> Correct
Today KIA Tigers have a game with Samsung Lions.
>> Now, KIA Tigers will have a game with Samsung Lions.
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