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Hello [이름]
I guess you like the KIA players very much.
Thank you so much for doing your homework today.
By the way, please see the corrections I have made, most specially the verbs.
~~Teacher Kris
Many KIA membe will coming.
>> Many KIA members will come/ will be coming to join the game.
Yun Seok Min,Kim Jin Woo,Zeke and An Chi Hong.
>> They are Yun Seok Min,Kim Jin Woo,Zeke and An Chi Hong.
Yun Seok Min come today.
YOU SHOULD SAY: BETTER USE THE PAST TENSE.
>> Yun Seok Min came today.
Kim Jin Woo and Zeke will come.
>> CORRECT!
OR:
>> Kim Jin Woo and Zeke will be coming the next day.
An Chi hong will come September 4th.
>> An Chi hong will come on September 4th.
And they will be a key player to go PostSeason.
YOU\'D BETTER SAY:
>> They are going to be leaders on the PostSeason.
Today KIA have a match with SK.
>> Today, KIA has a match with SK.
KIA Tigers ranking is at 4.
>> After the game, The KIA tigers got the 4th place.
Today\'s pitcher Kim Gang Hyeon vs Go Hyeou Jun.
>> Today\'s pitchers are Kim Gang Hyeon and Go Hyeou Jun.
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