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Yesterday my team didn't have a match because of rain.My team won previous game.Yun Seok Min,a pitcher do well.And KIM Won Sup hitted 2scoring clutch hit.And Kim Joo Hyeong hitted two run homerun.Yesterday, Dusan won the game.Bowden hitted only 2hit from 1inning to 8inning and he take away 10 strike out.Dusan's director and NC's director praised him.

Hi [이름]! ^^ Good evening and happy Thursday! Thank you again for sharing about baseball. You really love baseball, huh? ^^ I am learning about baseball from the entries you are sharing. ^^ Have another great day with baseball tomorrow! ~~ Teacher Kris   Yesterday my team didn\'t have a match because of rain. >> Correct! OR: >> Because of the rain yesterday, my team did not have a match. My team won previous game. >> My team won the previous game. BETTER: >> My team won the previous game though. Yun Seok Min,a pitcher do well. >> Yun Seok Min, a pitcher, did well. OR: >> Yun Seok Min, a pitcher, did very well. >> Yun Seok Min, a pitcher, did remarkably well. And KIM Won Sup hitted 2scoring clutch hit.>> Kim Won Sup hit a two-scored clutch hit. And Kim Joo Hyeong hitted two run homerun. >> Kim Joo Hyeong hit two homeruns. BETTER: >> Kim Joo Hyeong hit well leading to two homeruns. Yesterday, Dusan won the game. >> Correct! OR: >> Dusan won the game yesterday. Bowden hitted only 2hit from 1inning to 8inning and he take away 10 strike out. >> Bowden only hit twice from the first inning until the eighth inning taking away ten strike outs. Dusan\'s director and NC\'s director praised him. >> Correct! BETTER: >> Dusan and NC\'s directors praised him >> However, Dusan and NC\'s directors praised him for his performance.