Baseball40
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I hope you are okay.
I saw what your mom did to you.
I understand your mom because she was just doing her part as a mom.
She wanted you to study English because that is more important
than watching the baseball game.
Set your priorities, [이름] so that your mom
won\'t get mad at you.
I hope you are in a good condition.
See you in class.
~~ Teacher Kris
KIA Tigers ranking is at 4 now.
>> KIA Tigers\' rank is now at fourth.
But I can\'t see video clip for free.
>> But, I cannot freely see the video clip.
I am looking at the score when I doing my homework.
>> I was looking at the score when I was doing my homework.
But mom came back.
>> But, my mom came back.
Then,I can\'t turn on computer for free.So I am angry.
>> Then I couldn\'t turn on the computer so I am angry.
There is a code in computer.
>> There is a code on the computer.
My mom and dad told KIA Tigers become at 4 and Zeke and Kim Jin Woo was come back.
>> My mom and my dad told me that KIA Tigers\' rank is at 4th. Zeke and Kim Jin Woo came back.
This Sunday An Chi Hong will come back.
>> An Chi Hong will come on Sunday.
I don\'t want to participate that time.Becaue I can\'t see baseball then mom open the computer and have a class.
>> I didn\'t want to participate at that time because I couldn\'t be able to see the baseball game but my mom opened the computer and forced me to have a class with you.
So I was really angry.
>> I was really angry at that time.
Now I have no free to using computer.
>> Now, I cannot freely use the computer.
Baseball time is at 6:30 I will not eat anything after 6:30.
>> The schedule of the baseball game is at 6:30 so I cannot eat anything after 6:30.
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