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My team ranking is 8.We did well but we didn't do well about catcing ball and throw to to the player.Nexen ranking is 1 now.My friend's team Dusan is ranking2.LG Himanas hitted two run homerun and did a little funny ceremony.Jeong Wo Ram did first save in Hawanha.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
You did pretty well in your game! ^^
At least you did your best.
Do good in your next game. :)
See you in class.
Have a great day ahead. See you. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
My team ranking is 8.
>> Correct
We did well but we didn\'t do well about catcing ball and throw to to the player.
>> We did well but we didn\'t do well on catching the and throw it to the player.
Nexen ranking is 1 now.
>> Correct
My friend\'s team Dusan is ranking 2.
>> Correct
LG Himanas hitted two run homerun and did a little funny ceremony.
>> Correct
Jeong Wo Ram did first save in Hawanha.
>> Jeong Wo Ram did the first save in Hawanha.
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