Baseball6
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
How have you been? I am glad that that you take interest in the game of baseball and that you are still actively engaging yourself to the sport. Keep it up! Here are the corrections I made and I hope it will help you a lot. That would be all. Thank you very much.
Take care of yourself!
~~ Teacher Carol ^___^
Yesterday, my team lose the game.
>> Yesterday, my team lost the game.
SK Kim Gang Hyeon did well.
>> Correct
So, we didn\'t score any point.
>> Correct
OR: So, we didn\'t score a single point.
KIA\'s American pitcher do well but he can\'t be a winning pitcher.
>> KIA\'S American pitcher does well, but he can\'t be a winning pitcher.
KT\'s Lee Dae Heyong did 450 stolen base.
>> Correct
Today\'s soccer
>> YOU MEAN TO SAY: In today\'s soccer game,
My favorite soccer team Bayern Muinch won the game.
>> Correct.
BETTER: My favorite team, Bayern Muinch, won the game.
Today my team had a match with other team and tied 2and2.
>> Today, my team had a match with another team and tied 2 and 2.
But we won the previous game so we can go to the semi-final.
>> Correct.
OR: But we won the previous game so we may advance to the semi-final.
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