Baseball7
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening and happy Tuesday!
So, it\'s the seventh baseball composition and I\'m surely learning a lot!
Thank you for expressing your passion. ^^
Keep on writing about baseball and don\'t forget to have fun! ^^
May you have strikes of happy happenings tomorrow!
~~ Teacher Kris
We have a game today and today\'s pitcher is Yun Seong hwan and spruill.
>> We had a game today and today\'s pitcher was Yun Seong Hwan and Zeke Spruill.
Hwanha\'s record is the worst.
>> Hwanha\'s record was the worst.
KIA\'s ranking is still 9.
>> KIA was still in the 9th rank
OR:
>> KIA was still ranked in 9th.
Dusan\'s ranking 1.
>> Dusan was ranked 1st.
BETTER:
>> On the other hand, Dusan was ranked 1st.
Today\'s KIA Tigers line up is different.
>> Today, KIA Tigers\'s line up was different.
OR:
>> KIA Tigers\'s line up today was different
NC and Samsung is ranking 7.
>> NC and Samsung were both ranked 7th.
This game is a little important game.
>> Today\'s little game was important.
OR:
>> This game was an important game.
The road is will be hard.
>> This road will be difficult.
OR DID YOU MEAN TO SAY:
>> The road to success will be difficult.
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