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2016-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Yesterday, we had a match.KIA vs Samsung.We lose the game.Sin Jong Gil did a hit.In April 19,Sin Jong Gil,Gang han wool,Seo Dong Wook come back to KIA.And that day Brat [이름] hit a homerun and Seo Dong Wook hit 2-run-homerun.Yesterday we did not score more.In 10 inning, because ofPark Chan Ho's fault we lose a game.There is amazing thing.Kim Joo Chan did a Cycling hit.

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Hi [이름]! ^^ Good evening and happy Thursday! It\'s too bad that you lost the game, but you will have victories soon, you\'ll see! Thank you again for sharing about your passion! I had fun reading your entry today because it was full of details. ^^ I look forward to reading more of your compositions! ~~ Teacher Kris   Yesterday, we had a match. >> Correct! KIA vs Samsung. >> It was KIA Tigers versus Samsung Lions. We lose the game.>> We lost the game. Sin Jong Gil did a hit. >> Correct! In April 19,Sin Jong Gil,Gang han wool,Seo Dong Wook come back to KIA.>> On April 19th, Shin Jong Gil, Kang Han Wool and Seo Dong Wook came back for KIA. And that day Brat [이름] hit a homerun and Seo Dong Wook hit 2-run-homerun.>> And at that day, Brett Pill hit a homerun and Seo Dong Wook hit a two-run homerun. Yesterday we did not score more. >> Yesterday, we did not earn more scores. OR: >> Yesterday, we did not get to score more points. In 10 inning, because ofPark Chan Ho\'s fault we lose a game.>> In the 10th inning, because of Park chan Ho\'s error, we lost the game. There is amazing thing. >> There is an amazing thing that happened. Kim Joo Chan did a Cycling hit. >> Kim Joo Chan hit for the cycle.

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