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Yesterday, we had a match.KIA vs Samsung.We lose the game.Sin Jong Gil did a hit.In April 19,Sin Jong Gil,Gang han wool,Seo Dong Wook come back to KIA.And that day Brat [이름] hit a homerun and Seo Dong Wook hit 2-run-homerun.Yesterday we did not score more.In 10 inning, because ofPark Chan Ho's fault we lose a game.There is amazing thing.Kim Joo Chan did a Cycling hit.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening and happy Thursday!
It\'s too bad that you lost the game, but you will have victories soon, you\'ll see!
Thank you again for sharing about your passion!
I had fun reading your entry today because it was full of details. ^^
I look forward to reading more of your compositions!
~~ Teacher Kris
Yesterday, we had a match.
>> Correct!
KIA vs Samsung.
>> It was KIA Tigers versus Samsung Lions.
We lose the game.>> We lost the game.
Sin Jong Gil did a hit.
>> Correct!
In April 19,Sin Jong Gil,Gang han wool,Seo Dong Wook come back to KIA.>> On April 19th, Shin Jong Gil, Kang Han Wool and Seo Dong Wook came back for KIA.
And that day Brat [이름] hit a homerun and Seo Dong Wook hit 2-run-homerun.>> And at that day, Brett Pill hit a homerun and Seo Dong Wook hit a two-run homerun.
Yesterday we did not score more.
>> Yesterday, we did not earn more scores.
OR:
>> Yesterday, we did not get to score more points.
In 10 inning, because ofPark Chan Ho\'s fault we lose a game.>> In the 10th inning, because of Park chan Ho\'s error, we lost the game.
There is amazing thing.
>> There is an amazing thing that happened.
Kim Joo Chan did a Cycling hit.
>> Kim Joo Chan hit for the cycle.
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