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100:100 Kim Gang Hyeon:Jang Won Jun.Can you guess that meaning.Kim Gang hyeon and Jang Won Jun had 100win.These day's KIA's do well.No Su Gang and Seo Dong Wook do well.Spruill do well.Hwanha fan will be disappoint about team scores.My friend expect his team will fail for three game.Because his team Nexen almost always fail to team NC Dinosaur.My team have to win three games for the good ranking.
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100:100 Kim Gang Hyeon:Jang Won Jun.
>>>Kim Gang Hyeon: 100 points, Jang Won Jun: 100 points
OR:
>>>Both Kim Gang Hyeon and Jang Won Jun got 100 points.
Can you guess that meaning.
>>>Can you guess the meaning of that?
Kim Gang hyeon and Jang Won Jun had 100win.
>>>Kim Gang hyeon and Jang Won Jun both had a hundred points win.
These day\'s KIA\'s do well.
>>>KIA did well these days.
No Su Gang and Seo Dong Wook do well.
>>>No Su Gang and Seo Dong Wook did well.
Spruill do well.
>>>Spruill did well.
Hwanha fan will be disappoint about team scores.
>>>Hwanha\'s fans are going to be dissapointed about their team scores.
My friend expect his team will fail for three game.
>>>My friend expected his team to fail three games.
Because his team Nexen almost always fail to team NC Dinosaur.
>>>Because his team Nexan is almost always loosing to team NC Dinosaur.
My team have to win three games for the good ranking.
>>>My team has to win three games for them to have a good ranking.
>>>Kim Gang Hyeon: 100 points, Jang Won Jun: 100 points
OR:
>>>Both Kim Gang Hyeon and Jang Won Jun got 100 points.
Can you guess that meaning.
>>>Can you guess the meaning of that?
Kim Gang hyeon and Jang Won Jun had 100win.
>>>Kim Gang hyeon and Jang Won Jun both had a hundred points win.
These day\'s KIA\'s do well.
>>>KIA did well these days.
No Su Gang and Seo Dong Wook do well.
>>>No Su Gang and Seo Dong Wook did well.
Spruill do well.
>>>Spruill did well.
Hwanha fan will be disappoint about team scores.
>>>Hwanha\'s fans are going to be dissapointed about their team scores.
My friend expect his team will fail for three game.
>>>My friend expected his team to fail three games.
Because his team Nexen almost always fail to team NC Dinosaur.
>>>Because his team Nexan is almost always loosing to team NC Dinosaur.
My team have to win three games for the good ranking.
>>>My team has to win three games for them to have a good ranking.
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