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Many Koreans might be that the success of life are high social position and to be rich.
Almost choices in Korea are connected these.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]!
Do you agree with this: A satisfied life is better than a successful life?
A lot of people might not agree with this. How bout you?
Thank you for always writing your thought!
Aki~
Many Koreans might be that the success of life are high social position and to be rich.
>>> Many Koreans might be that success in life is a high social position and being rich.
Almost choices in Korea are connected these.
>>> Almost choices in Korea are connected to these.
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