basket ball

2011-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Bella

학생이 쓴 원문

Today we have rain. So we have P.Eclass in the P.E room. in the P.E room just have basketball goal. So what can we do??/ Play basket ball!!! but we lost game too.!&& that class are same yesterday another class. we have a panic...

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Good day!I can see that you still had space to play basketball.I hope you still enjoyed though you played in the P.E room.Good thing is you were able to do thigs well and had fun at the same time.Have a good weekend!

-T.Rebecca-

Today we have rain.

>>Today it rained.

>>It rained today.

So we have P.Eclass in the P.E room.

>>So,we had our P.E class in the P.E room.
in the P.E room just have basketball goal.

>>The P.E room just have a basketball goal.

>>The P.E room just have a basketball ring.
So what can we do??

>>Correct
Play basket ball!!! but we lost game too.!&&

>>We played basketball but we lost the game.
that class are same yesterday another class.

>>That class is the same as yesterday and the other day.
we have a panic...

>>We are on panic.

>>We are alarmed.

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