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Hello BB. Thank you for the effort on answering and sending this in. English is indeed the international language. To be able to travel comfortably, communicating is essential. Good luck! I\'ll help you in the best way I can. It\'s a matter for you and I to work on. :)
- T . Beth
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I got married on March.
>>> I got married in March.
At that time we didn\'t go on a honeymoon. Because he and i were very busy.
>>> At that time, we didn\'t go on a honeymoon because he and I were very busy.
>>> OR: We didn\'t go on a honeymoon at that time because we were quite busy.
So we went on last week.
>>> So, we went last week.
As soon as i get married i started english study.
>>> As soon as I got married, I started to study English.
Because when we go on a honeymoon i wanna be good english speaker.
>>> Because when we go on a honeymoon, I wanna be a good English speaker.
>>> When we will finally go o0na honeymoon, I want to be good at speaking English.
Thanks to Power Enlish, i could speak english a little.
>>> Thanks to Power English, I could speak English a bit.
>>> OR: Thanks to Power English, I was able to improve a bit.
But now we are projecting some travel.
>>> We are currectly planning to go travel.
My husband is very busy for his work.
>>> My husband is very busy at work.
So i have to speak any language.
>>> Therefore, I have to speak other language.
>>> OR: Therefore, I should be the one speaking in a foreign language.
The reason i study english is go go a trip and communicate well anywhere.
>>> The reason Is study English is to go on a trip anywhere and communicate well.
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