bb's hw
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강사 첨삭
Hello BB! Thank you for sending this in. I appreciate your effort, once again. It\'s really good to find a hobby that keeps you healthy. It\'s like killing two birds in one stone. You enjoy it and at the same time you become healthier. I should find a hobby like that. I decided to start mountain climbing too. I don\'t know when I\'ll start but I will.
- T. Beth
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I think having a hobby doesn\'t matter gender.
>>>> I think having a hobby does not depend on one\'s gender.
>>>> OR: Gender does not matter when it comes to having a hobby.
In Korea, most of women is like seeing a movie or listening to the music so on..
>>>> In Korea, most women like seeing movies, listening to music and so on.
Most of men is like playing a soccer or playing a baseball so on..
>>>> Most of men like playing soccer, baseball and so on.
i think women like to be silent , and men like to be dynamic .
>>>> I think women like to be silent and men like to be dynamic.
>>>> OR: I think women prefer silence while men prefer being active.
These days people are intersted in their healthy life.
>>>> These days, people are interested in a healthy life.
so people eat healthful food or excersise for their good body.
>>>> So people eat healthy food or exercise for a good body.
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