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2018-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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- yes i think so. When i go shopping, salesperson comes and say to me, "May i help you?" of course, there is when i need to a hand but mostly i just look aroud shop. Then i say to her, "I'm just looking aroud. if i need a hand i'll call back you" So these days there are two kinds of basket in the shop. "Just look aroud" or "Help me"

강사 첨삭

Hello BB. thank you so much for sending this in once again. It is indeed nice to get a hand from salesperson. I mean, that is mainly their job. However, it could be a bit annoying having someone tailing you while you look around the shop. That\'s actually a clever idea, having two kinds of baskets in a shop. I\'ve never seen that here in my place.

- T. Beth

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- yes i think so.
>>>> CORRECT grammar, but you write it this way;  Yes, I think so.    
When i go shopping, salesperson comes and say to me, \"May i help you?\"
>>>>  When I go shopping, a salesperson comes to me and say. \"May I help you?\"     
of course, there is when i need to a hand but mostly i just look aroud shop.
>>>>  Of course, there are times when I need a hand but I mostly just look around the shop.     
Then i say to her, \"I\'m just looking aroud. if i need a hand i\'ll call back you\"
>>>>  Then I tell her, \"I\'m just looking around. If I need a hand, I will call you.\"     
So these days there are two kinds of basket in the shop.
>>>> So these days, there are two kinds of baskets in the shop.      
\"Just look aroud\" or \"Help me\"

>>>> They are labeled, \"Just looking around\" and \"Help me\".     

 

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