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Hello BB. thank you so much for sending this in once again. It is indeed nice to get a hand from salesperson. I mean, that is mainly their job. However, it could be a bit annoying having someone tailing you while you look around the shop. That\'s actually a clever idea, having two kinds of baskets in a shop. I\'ve never seen that here in my place.
- T. Beth
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- yes i think so.
>>>> CORRECT grammar, but you write it this way; Yes, I think so.
When i go shopping, salesperson comes and say to me, \"May i help you?\"
>>>> When I go shopping, a salesperson comes to me and say. \"May I help you?\"
of course, there is when i need to a hand but mostly i just look aroud shop.
>>>> Of course, there are times when I need a hand but I mostly just look around the shop.
Then i say to her, \"I\'m just looking aroud. if i need a hand i\'ll call back you\"
>>>> Then I tell her, \"I\'m just looking around. If I need a hand, I will call you.\"
So these days there are two kinds of basket in the shop.
>>>> So these days, there are two kinds of baskets in the shop.
\"Just look aroud\" or \"Help me\"
>>>> They are labeled, \"Just looking around\" and \"Help me\".
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