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Hello BB. Thank you for this. Korean fashion is really trendy these days, especially in Southeast Asian countries. I think a person can be fashionable and not spend too much. Knowing where to do your shopping is important.
- T. Beth
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When i was not married, i often went shopping near my house.
>>>> CORRECT. (When I was not married, I often went shopping near my house.)
i lived Kang Nam in Seoul where is very famous for new fashion.
>>>> I lived in Kang Nam in Seoul which is very famous for new fashion.
But after i moved this coutry, i annoyed going shooping.
>>>> But after I moved to this country side, I am annoyed going shopping.
So i go shopping when the seasons change.
>>>> CORRECT.
>>>> OR: So I only go shopping when the season changes.
i usually go shopping to buy my clothes.
>>>> CORRECT.
>>>> OR: I usually go shopping to buy clothes for myself.
As i said, there is a shopping town in Kang Nam.
>>>> Like I said, there is a shopping ton in Kang Nam.
The place of clothes\'s price is very cheap.
>>>> The prices of clothes there are very cheap.
Exception go shopping to buy my clothes, i usally enjoy doing web surfing .
>>>> Aside from shopping for my clothes, I usually enjoy wed surfing.
of course not as much as my husband
>>>> Not as much as my husband though.
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