bb's hw
학생이 쓴 원문
First, we have to know traffic rules.
When we take a drive license's test, we have to keep in mind all of traffic rules.
Second, when we drive a car, we have to look around .
Third. like i said, don't save a parking fee.
Because parking violation fee is more expensive than parking fee.
강사 첨삭
Hello BB. Thank you for sending this in. It is really important to follow traffic rules. Drive safely!
- T. Beth
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First, we have to know traffic rules.>>> CORRECT.
>>> OR: First, we have to be familiar with traffic rules.
When we take a drive license\'s test, we have to keep in mind all of traffic rules.
>>> When we take a driver\'s license test, we have to keep all traffic rules in mind.
Second, when we drive a car, we have to look around .
>>> Second, we have to look around when driving a car.
Third. like i said, don\'t save a parking fee.
When we take a drive license\'s test, we have to keep in mind all of traffic rules.
>>> When we take a driver\'s license test, we have to keep all traffic rules in mind.
Second, when we drive a car, we have to look around .
>>> Second, we have to look around when driving a car.
Third. like i said, don\'t save a parking fee.
>>> Third, like i said before, don\'t ignore parking fees.
Because parking violation fee is more expensive than parking fee.
Because parking violation fee is more expensive than parking fee.
>>> CORRECT.
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