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Hello BB. Thank you so much for the effort of answering and sending this in. Philippine has a very deep culture on superstitions as well. Although they are not mostly logical, they do give people hope for some possibilities.
- T. Beth
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People tend to be afraid of their future.
>>> CORRECT.
So peopel would like to konw their future.
>>> So people would like to know about their future.
>>> OR: People tend to be curious about what their future holds.
There are many supersitions in Korea.
>>> CORRECT.
For example, fortune telling, Tarot cards, shaman, so on..
>>> For example, fortune telling, Tarot cards, shamanism, and so on.
They say about someone\'s destiny. Someone believes what they saying.
>>> They talk about someone\'s destiny and that person believes what they say.
But what they saying is not scientifically true, only give comfort or warning to someone.
>>> However, what they are saying is not scientifically true. It only gives comfort and warning to someone.
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